Did I say I Love You?
I look at you and smile
At that goofy grin on your face
Or you laughing at your own joke
In your typical style
I call and ask you
Whether you are all right
After a bad bout of cold
Or some disappointment new
I text you and think
Whether you will reply
Or just hit the delete button
Or send it to the archive’s sink
I meet you and feel
The same sensation within
And unfamiliar fluttering
Of my heart still
I touch you and sense
Your mood and mind
Especially if you are lost
In a web of thoughts dense
I think of you and know
Despite all that I mentioned
And the reason of it all
Did I say I love you?
Β© Debosmita Nandy 2010
Poetry was always my first love and I am sad to see how few of them I write these days! This was attempted and completed in 10 minutes flat! I am mighty pleased π It’s a different form of rhyming β abca. Hope you like it π
P.S. Is it too mushy?? Is it mushier than "Awaiting Love" and "Let me"??
P.P.S. Too many love-shove around me (in others’ lives) which acted as inspiration. Don’t get any other ideas! ;-)
Nice one π
Thanks π
Babes,such flow of thoughts in just 10 mins!Aha ,is this dedicated to someone,someone in ur mind when u penned this down?;)
You never read the disclaimer, did you? π Friends around me are getting hitched, which was the inspiration behind ‘such flow of thought’ π
Do you know that a good poet should be able to write a romantic poem when not in love and sad poems when happy and vice versa???? π You get the drift, right π
very well written, you should dabble a little more in poetry
Thanks π Surely, will do so π
Wonderful Smita.. simple and I loved it π π
congrats on the blogadda pick π
Thank you π π The Blogadda pick was surpising!
It was very nice. π
Thanks! and that’s a cool gravatar π
Beautiful poem!! Will look forward to reading more of such mushy poems π
Welcome and thanks! π More mushy poem??? let’s see what I come up with next.
Lovely, Just sheer beauty.
Mushy, romantic.
π π You liked it? Thanks π
You captured the tense moments just right. Liked the poem.