Did I say I Love You?
I look at you and smile
At that goofy grin on your face
Or you laughing at your own joke
In your typical style
I call and ask you
Whether you are all right
After a bad bout of cold
Or some disappointment new
I text you and think
Whether you will reply
Or just hit the delete button
Or send it to the archive’s sink
I meet you and feel
The same sensation within
And unfamiliar fluttering
Of my heart still
I touch you and sense
Your mood and mind
Especially if you are lost
In a web of thoughts dense
I think of you and know
Despite all that I mentioned
And the reason of it all
Did I say I love you?
© Debosmita Nandy 2010
Poetry was always my first love and I am sad to see how few of them I write these days! This was attempted and completed in 10 minutes flat! I am mighty pleased
It’s a different form of rhyming – abca. Hope you like it
P.S. Is it too mushy?? Is it mushier than "Awaiting Love" and "Let me"??
P.P.S. Too many love-shove around me (in others’ lives) which acted as inspiration. Don’t get any other ideas!







Nice one
Thanks
Babes,such flow of thoughts in just 10 mins!Aha ,is this dedicated to someone,someone in ur mind when u penned this down?;)
You never read the disclaimer, did you?
Friends around me are getting hitched, which was the inspiration behind ‘such flow of thought’
Do you know that a good poet should be able to write a romantic poem when not in love and sad poems when happy and vice versa????
You get the drift, right
very well written, you should dabble a little more in poetry
Thanks
Surely, will do so
Wonderful Smita.. simple and I loved it
congrats on the blogadda pick
Thank you
The Blogadda pick was surpising!
It was very nice.
Thanks! and that’s a cool gravatar
Beautiful poem!! Will look forward to reading more of such mushy poems
Welcome and thanks!
More mushy poem??? let’s see what I come up with next.
Lovely, Just sheer beauty.
Mushy, romantic.
You captured the tense moments just right. Liked the poem.