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Fare Thee Well

June 22, 2014

It is 6 in the morning, I am told by the Warden. The last day of my life begins.

As a final wish I want to tell Malati that she is my first and only love and ask for her forgiveness.

For raping her twenty years ago on a college excursion in a drunken state.

 

This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda. This week’s theme required bloggers to write a post on what would happen on the last day of one’s life and begin with “It is 6 in the morning”. It feels good to be back to writing fiction in my favourite 55 word format.

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8 Comments leave one →
  1. June 22, 2014 9:48 pm

    ohhhh that is SAD

    why wait for that many years .. how could he sleep all these days

  2. June 22, 2014 11:22 pm

    20 years is a long time to apologize but ………………..

  3. Swayambhu Mukherjee permalink
    June 22, 2014 11:31 pm

    I like this!

  4. June 23, 2014 10:36 pm

    In few words u have delivered a fabulous post!! Brilliant. It was sad but it made me think!

    • debosmita permalink*
      June 23, 2014 11:04 pm

      Thank you and welcome to my blog 🙂

  5. June 23, 2014 10:39 pm

    So much in few words.. That is the story of many who gain conscience behind the bars.. hats off!

    • debosmita permalink*
      June 23, 2014 11:05 pm

      That is the challenge of 55 fiction format. Glad that you liked it.

  6. June 28, 2014 2:08 am

    Gosh! I admit that this one shocked me!! I wouldn’t know what to call it, so well written and the aim was to shock us and you did. It forces us to think bout our actions and deeds as human beings. You’ve touched hearts.

    http://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2014/06/22/wow-today-is-the-last-day-of-your-life/

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