The Many Faces of Love
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The challenge is to write a set of three 55F, where the first two sets should be a story on its own and the two stories should climax / conclude / inter-twine in the third set of 55F
THE PROPOSAL
“Will you marry me?”
Sunita looked at the handsome face of the man kneeling in front of her.
Everyone had warned her against him.
“He is a loafer, flirt and has shady business.”
“Why?”
He held her hand tenderly. She felt the tremors in her heart.
“Because I love you.”
And your wealthy dad too.
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THE LOVER BOY
“Sanjiv, my best friend, come back to India fast. I have a surprise for you,” she had told him the last time.
He checked the ring again.
He will now honour the vows of love taken when they were both seven.
“You are late. She eloped two days ago.” Her father broke down into tears.
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THE HALF-TRUTH
The old man sat in the balcony, staring ahead blankly.
“I wish she knew this truth before.”
The newspaper in his hand read ‘Notorious drug dealer arrested…’
“Now I will betroth her to you, if you agree.”
Sanjiv hugged the frail old man and hoped he never saw the second part ‘…wife commits suicide.’
Edited to add:
This post won me the title of “Queen of 55F“! 😀
That was a nice narrative, Debosmita! And you have packed it with a lot of emotions stretching over the years.
It was really good! I enjoyed reading it. 🙂
Thank you dear 🙂 Glad that you liked it 🙂
I second and third Rumya 🙂
Pal, thank you so much 🙂
That’s an epic you’ve packed in there!! Awesome work. period.
Thanku! thanku 🙂
Wow! Well done, Debosmita!
Welcome back to my blog 🙂 Missed you here and thanks a ton 🙂
wow.. loved it.
Thank you so much 🙂 Do drop in more often
It’s going to be difficult which one to pick.!
Cheers
GB
I hope they pick both 😉
THE PROPOSAL – Acedia/attraction
THE LOVER BOY – Sloth/Desire
THE HALF-TRUTH – Despair/Compassion
Works wonderfully Deb.. I sense a lot here..
You have summed them up wonderfully!
Very nice climax of ‘The Proposal’
Really???! I was thinking it was the weakest! Thank you 🙂
Congrats!I have read your many faces of love and they combined with much compassion
Welcome! and thank you so much for your appreciation
Congrats debo….
🙂
Thanku 🙂 btw, your email ID is quite ….er.. surprising 😉